The Revolt of the Unfit, by Nicholas Murray Butler. In the introduction the author gives general information.the thesis statement is in the first paragraph. It reads, there are wars and rumors of wars in the portion of the territory occupied by the doctrine of organic evolution. The conclusion technique that the author used to conclude his essay was a quotation. I like quotes at the end of essays because it seem to bring his know idea to the essay.

essay 1

1. Title: The Desired Look: Nothing But Bones / By: Rebecca Patton2. Intro Approach: Description3. Thesis: The obsession of many young girls over their appearance or weight has led to agrowing number of people who have developed an eating disorder to try to deal with theirlack of self-esteem or other related problems.4. The introduction was really good. It explained how young girls are way to obbsesed aboutwhat they look like. They are exercising to much and treating it like it is acompitition. The thesis statement also told how these dangerous methods of trying to get skinnyare leading to eating disorders that can eventually kill these girls. These young girls have a lack of self-esteem and other psychological issues. I think parents should be more involved with there children's lives. That may prevent further problems.5. Concluding Approach: Prediction6. The conclusion summarized the essay. Nobody really knows why people get eatingdisorders. When doctors diagnose eating disorders they have to look at all circumstances surrounding the child. I believe it is difficult for doctors to do. Many woman feel that in order to look like a super model they have to give up food and starve themselves to the point where they are so skinny and grose looking. They do this to look beautiful on the outside. They do not realize that they look bad and are slowly killing themselves.

would i like to be famus?

That is something i would not no how to answer do to i would not want people in my family business and I mite get Bord of having to act now if i was doing something like Ice Skating and i was good at it them i thing i would love to do it to be on that ice and glide. I would love to do all there turns and dancing. It just seem I would feel like a princess. I have always wanted to be a princess. They only thing that bothers me with that is the cold i do not like to be cold. after all the dancing i mite get wormed up but i do not think so because I will be on ice. i would not like to be in the eye of everyone t.v. all the time ice skater only perform for a few months and then there done. That will be perfect for me.

what kind of sport or activites do i like?

i enjoy watching sports such as football,baseball,boxing,and ice skating. I have not ever been a type or person to play any sport i once played basketball but that was for a summer group and i was fun but i easily grow out of it. i thing sport for fun and they give a time to have family over a eat. game party is always great to have. i love to so everyone together i do not have any game party's but i go to them at my friend house and family houses. i love to see everyone yelling out the t.v. i think it funny to see how the guys get so in to it.I am usually the one at a game party how goes for the other team it get everyone mad, but it is a good mad. one thing i like to watch and usually it is by myself is Ice Skiting i think it is one sport that i fined wonderful, how they gild on the ice it is like they are floating in air. sometimes i imagine me able to skate like that and how it must feel. i would think there has to be allot of thing you have to do to get to be a perfection Ice Skater.

body art

I do not have any body art at this time but i use to have a tung ring and two other piercing but I took them out 3moths sfter i got them. i would like to get angel wings on my back and a baby angel on my arm with my daughter anastaisa name. I also want a peecock on my thigh,I just think tatoos are cool and they look nice. i love body art it means alot when you get something meanfool. I have alway been in to body are and piercing are coo to but i am not a big fan of it. i have known peolple who has big hole in there ears and it looks like it hurts but that is not for me. if i was to get any other piercings I thinks i mite get my nose pierced but im not forsher.This is how i feel about bady art and want i would like to get in the furter when i get money because badoy art cost alot.

cultural backround

I have many things that identify my cultural background, there has been 3 generation of my family born in san francisco californa. but that is not where my culture comes from my fathers grandmothers was borm in Mexico and my fathers grandfather was born in Chilli,On his mothers side. On my fathers, fathers side his grandmother was born in Mexico and his grand father was born in Germany. Now my mother family, family has been in usa for 4 genertions, my mothers great grandmother was born in Spain and my mothers great grandfather was born in England. On my mothers father side her great grandfather was iresh and his wife was a Native Indea.

5 vocab

caitiff \KAY-tif\, noun, adjective:1. cowardly and mean

bulwark \BUL-wurk; -wawrk\, noun,vainglory \VAYN-glor-ee; vayn-GLOR-ee\, noun:1. Excessive pride in one's achievements, abilities, qualities, etc.2.Vain display. verb:1. to defend or protect, serve as a bulwark; shelter

surreptitious \suhr-uhp-TISH-uhs; suh-rep-\, adjective:1. Done, made, or gotten by stealth.2. Acting with or marked by stealth.

sublunary \suhb-LOO-nuh-ree\, adjective:Situated beneath the moon; hence, of or pertaining to this world; terrestrial; earthly.

fop \FOP\, noun:A man who is overly concerned with or vain about his dress and appearance; a dandy.

1. That boy whobumped in to me at the store was caitiff and did not bother to apologies.
2. I am vary bulwark about leaning how to drive.
3. John surreptitious the radio from the store.
4. The sublunary is vary interesting.
5. My huben victor is vary fop when its time to get ready.