The Revolt of the Unfit, by Nicholas Murray Butler. In the introduction the author gives general information.the thesis statement is in the first paragraph. It reads, there are wars and rumors of wars in the portion of the territory occupied by the doctrine of organic evolution. The conclusion technique that the author used to conclude his essay was a quotation. I like quotes at the end of essays because it seem to bring his know idea to the essay.

essay 1

1. Title: The Desired Look: Nothing But Bones / By: Rebecca Patton2. Intro Approach: Description3. Thesis: The obsession of many young girls over their appearance or weight has led to agrowing number of people who have developed an eating disorder to try to deal with theirlack of self-esteem or other related problems.4. The introduction was really good. It explained how young girls are way to obbsesed aboutwhat they look like. They are exercising to much and treating it like it is acompitition. The thesis statement also told how these dangerous methods of trying to get skinnyare leading to eating disorders that can eventually kill these girls. These young girls have a lack of self-esteem and other psychological issues. I think parents should be more involved with there children's lives. That may prevent further problems.5. Concluding Approach: Prediction6. The conclusion summarized the essay. Nobody really knows why people get eatingdisorders. When doctors diagnose eating disorders they have to look at all circumstances surrounding the child. I believe it is difficult for doctors to do. Many woman feel that in order to look like a super model they have to give up food and starve themselves to the point where they are so skinny and grose looking. They do this to look beautiful on the outside. They do not realize that they look bad and are slowly killing themselves.

would i like to be famus?

That is something i would not no how to answer do to i would not want people in my family business and I mite get Bord of having to act now if i was doing something like Ice Skating and i was good at it them i thing i would love to do it to be on that ice and glide. I would love to do all there turns and dancing. It just seem I would feel like a princess. I have always wanted to be a princess. They only thing that bothers me with that is the cold i do not like to be cold. after all the dancing i mite get wormed up but i do not think so because I will be on ice. i would not like to be in the eye of everyone t.v. all the time ice skater only perform for a few months and then there done. That will be perfect for me.

what kind of sport or activites do i like?

i enjoy watching sports such as football,baseball,boxing,and ice skating. I have not ever been a type or person to play any sport i once played basketball but that was for a summer group and i was fun but i easily grow out of it. i thing sport for fun and they give a time to have family over a eat. game party is always great to have. i love to so everyone together i do not have any game party's but i go to them at my friend house and family houses. i love to see everyone yelling out the t.v. i think it funny to see how the guys get so in to it.I am usually the one at a game party how goes for the other team it get everyone mad, but it is a good mad. one thing i like to watch and usually it is by myself is Ice Skiting i think it is one sport that i fined wonderful, how they gild on the ice it is like they are floating in air. sometimes i imagine me able to skate like that and how it must feel. i would think there has to be allot of thing you have to do to get to be a perfection Ice Skater.

body art

I do not have any body art at this time but i use to have a tung ring and two other piercing but I took them out 3moths sfter i got them. i would like to get angel wings on my back and a baby angel on my arm with my daughter anastaisa name. I also want a peecock on my thigh,I just think tatoos are cool and they look nice. i love body art it means alot when you get something meanfool. I have alway been in to body are and piercing are coo to but i am not a big fan of it. i have known peolple who has big hole in there ears and it looks like it hurts but that is not for me. if i was to get any other piercings I thinks i mite get my nose pierced but im not forsher.This is how i feel about bady art and want i would like to get in the furter when i get money because badoy art cost alot.

cultural backround

I have many things that identify my cultural background, there has been 3 generation of my family born in san francisco californa. but that is not where my culture comes from my fathers grandmothers was borm in Mexico and my fathers grandfather was born in Chilli,On his mothers side. On my fathers, fathers side his grandmother was born in Mexico and his grand father was born in Germany. Now my mother family, family has been in usa for 4 genertions, my mothers great grandmother was born in Spain and my mothers great grandfather was born in England. On my mothers father side her great grandfather was iresh and his wife was a Native Indea.

5 vocab

caitiff \KAY-tif\, noun, adjective:1. cowardly and mean

bulwark \BUL-wurk; -wawrk\, noun,vainglory \VAYN-glor-ee; vayn-GLOR-ee\, noun:1. Excessive pride in one's achievements, abilities, qualities, etc.2.Vain display. verb:1. to defend or protect, serve as a bulwark; shelter

surreptitious \suhr-uhp-TISH-uhs; suh-rep-\, adjective:1. Done, made, or gotten by stealth.2. Acting with or marked by stealth.

sublunary \suhb-LOO-nuh-ree\, adjective:Situated beneath the moon; hence, of or pertaining to this world; terrestrial; earthly.

fop \FOP\, noun:A man who is overly concerned with or vain about his dress and appearance; a dandy.

1. That boy whobumped in to me at the store was caitiff and did not bother to apologies.
2. I am vary bulwark about leaning how to drive.
3. John surreptitious the radio from the store.
4. The sublunary is vary interesting.
5. My huben victor is vary fop when its time to get ready.

An Idyl of the Honey-bee ,John Burroughs (1837– )

John begins by talking about man surround himself with creatures. He say that man work in a line just like the hunny-bee.There is nessting and love just as there is in our homes today.In the end he talks about being in the hive with family. The introductory was be a surprising lead in. i did dont uderstand this essay so much all i got from it was that he was staying that bee are like humans they do for there family and work for there colliny as we all do every day.

I Talk of Dreams, By William Dean Howells

In this essay I found that William D.Howells talks about his dreams and how other have told him their dreams.He begin his essay by saying, "Everyone knows how delightful the dreams are that one dreams one's self ." His closing statement was when you are sleeping and dreaming there are times when you wake up and are able to go back to sleep and still go right back to the dream you where just having. I find that he stared off with a Strong statement.He ended with a call of action. Ipick this essay because i like to know about other dreams and what they experience in them i have had any of dream where i have woken up and still when to sleep within minet and was able to be in the same dream.

five vocabulary

soiree
swah-RAY, noun, an evening parsidereal \sy-DEER-ee-uhl\, adjective:measured or determined by the daily motion of the stars; of or having to do with the stars or constellations ty or social

siderea
measured or determined by the daily motion of the stars; of or having to do with the stars or constellations

Feitsui
The Chinese name for a highly prized variety of pale green jade.

tomenta
pubescence consisting of longish, soft, entangled hairs pressed close to the surface.

patenting

A grant made by a government that confers upon the creator of an invention the sole right to make, use, and sell that invention for a set period of time.

incomplete sentences

I took a test and had to correct five incomplete sentences. I had two wrong. I feel that I need to improve on run- on sentences. I tend not to put periods at the end of sentences. It bothers everyone who reads my work.I think it might just be easier for me not to the them in my work.This is what i found out by taking this test.

Obama's speech

well i read and hard Obama speech and i think he did a grate job one part of his speech that really cought my eye was when Obama said that theres a lot that need to be done and he well not be Abel to change it in a day and or in a term i think he was vary smart for saying that because it feels like he is letting me and the people no that he is going to do all he can but not to expect so much from him because there's so much that he is going to have to fix and change so i think that speech was grate

topic for my slo

I'm not vary sure on what I'm going to write about let i feel that it mite be to soon for me to tell. Well i think that i mite write about Obama because right now he is the must popular perpson. im not sure, there are so many things that i have in my mined to right about but it all comes down to writing about thing that is going on in my famiy. like my aunt has brest cancer and ather anut just got over brest cancer. Why do evry one in my family has or is getting some typ or cancer em i next. I just mite write about how im sarced to die from cancer at a young age or cancer by it self

english class pg16

well to day i can only think about me and my family it seem like that's all i can ever think about i love my husban and i hope everything goes well for us we deserve it i have been together far the longs to me at lest and every one say that i have to wait for my fairy tale story but i relay don't want to wait any longer but i will give it more time to happen i really want to get our own home so i can do i want when i want to i want have to worry about anyone or anything and Anastasia can have her now room with all her stuff in it so its not all over my room and my husban can to whatever he want because it will be his own home

english class 1

Today is the first day of your English class and i have tree goals for this class my 1st goal is
get a good grade, i will do all my work class work and any homework that i well get.
2Nd is i will complete all my bogs
3rd i will try to be here everyday and on time i will try to accomplish this by waking up from my after noon nap earlier

in class

so now every day we have to talk in front of the whole class for 60 sec. about anything i feel that this is OK 4 me because i mite help me get over the fear that i have standing up and talk while every1 is looking at me but at the end of this course i will have to stand up there and talk for 4- 5 min. no i don't no how this is going to work but i will give it my best.

CONFLICT MANAGEMENT STYLES

WE READ PAGE 239 IN THE COMMUNICATION AND I FOUND OUT THAT IM A ACCOMMDATION PERSON I GIVE IN TO PEOPEL I DO AS OTHERS WANT TO MAKE THEM HAPPY EVEN IF IT DOSENT HELP ME BUT THERE R TIMES THAT I DONT GIVE IN N THEN OTHERS TIND TO GET MAD BUT THEY GIVE IN CUZ I RIMIND PEOPEL THAT I DNT EVER DO WHAT I WANT BUT THEN I FEEL BAD BECOUSE I NO THAT THE OTHER PERSON REALY TO DO SOMETHING ELES I SOME TIMES DONT EVEN HAS FUNN BUT I TRY TO MAK THE BEST OF IT THATS Y IM A ACCOMMODATION

today

today we talk about listening do u thing u can listen well well i dont thing i have a probel lisening there are just thing that i chose not to listent to like when someone want to tell me what i should not do wen they dont even no what to do them self thats how i think i listen

test

to day we took a test an di did not do well.and now we will be watchen sherk the movie we have to write 3 stariotype

today in class

to day in class we talked about a test that we are going to take tomarow n we talked about the differents about man and woman and we talked about speech in this class it seems like it going to be easy to pass but i still dont understan y we have to blog our tacher wants us to blog everyday about wath we do in class but i dant no y i think it would be better if we just write it and give it to her its not like she reads our blogs and no one else reads them so wat is the point

self-esteem test

i took a self-esteem test and i got a 72% to me that low but according to this test i have a reasonably high level of self-esteem but there is still need for improvement.

what i need help in

there are many thing i need to impove i need to impove my reading, and writing i have a vary hard time spelling and even a harder time write things correcly my spelling is at a 8th grade studend. well thats at least what i think. ive tryed reading book to impove but it just puts me to sleep ive tryed and changed the tapys of books i have read but it just has not helped i think its because i lrean better by listening then reading. then that effects the way i spell i need to fined a better way to leran how to get in to reading so i can be a beter reader a writer

my learning styles are what is your learing style

im a social person who loves to be in groups and arond peole im also a aural learner i have to listen to what is being tought to me.there are time where i like to be alone and to me self.what kind of bolger are you?